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Tom Pendergast's avatar

This is great Michael. I’ve been an editor at several points in my career and think you’re spot on. I often tell people I edit that it’s okay to be mad at me after first reading my edits, after all, I’ve likely told them that they’ve not yet succeeded at something they were trying very hard at. But I remind them that we share a crucial goal--to make their writing better--and that I’m “on their team.”

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Exactly. Well said. Team effort--but it can feel at first (as a writer) like having your skin flayed.

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Robert Maynord's avatar

My guess is that most authors would love to have a collaborative relationship with an editor. I am in an authors group where we share our work with other, and the comments are always positive - I appreciate that. However, it is especially encouraging when someone has a serious close read of one of my articles, and offers a corrective suggestion that improves the work overall.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

I feel ya. It’s so important to get positive feedback on our work. However. (Haha.) I also think in current times perhaps too much emphasis has been put on always being positive. I’m not suggesting one should be negative or judgmental; in fact never that; that’s the anti-writing. What I mean is: If you truly want to improve as a writer (versus solely getting your ego stroked) you’ve got to get real substantive criticism. Criticism to help improve the work, make it the very best it can be. Writing is hard. It’s a serious craft. No one gets it right easily.

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Robert Maynord's avatar

Very well said, Michael!

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Robb Grindstaff's avatar

Also a writer and editor here. Great post. I just did a 3-part series on hiring and working with an editor, and we hit a lot of the same points. You said it more succinctly than I did though. I probably should have had an editor tighten mine up. :)

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Love it ❤️❤️🔥🙌

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Geoffrey Golden's avatar

Great overview for working with an editor! As someone who’s had their work edited before, I know the process leads to many benefits to the finished work.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

🔥🔥❤️

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Alexa Tuttle's avatar

Reedsy is a fabulous resource for writers as well as a marketplace for writers looking to hire vetted professionals in the industry! I found two editors on Reedsy who were absolutely fantastic to work with and taught me so much about the process of editing. My work has become far better after collaborating with them. I also love the many other fun tools, blog posts, and features.

Kindlepreneur is awesome, too! I always spend too much time getting lost in the endless archive of knowledge on the website. Publisher rocket is a great tool for doing market research as well.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Cool! Yes. Reedsy and Kindle-P; I’ve been on both!

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Michael Estrin's avatar

Good post, Michael! Curious to know if you’ve heard of any editors out there doing developmental edits for serialized fiction? Most serial fiction writers I know on Substack and Wattpad don’t worry too much about clean copy, so they skip the line edits. But serial fiction is a different structural beast from a book. One of the biggest challenges of serial, at least in my experience, is structuring the story in a way that brings readers back every week.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Good question. No. I haven’t. But a solid line edit is always helpful. And I think in general whether it’s a serialization or just regular chapters in a book, the art of strong Cliff-hangers is crucial :)

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Heather Holland's avatar

How do editors feel about beta readers? I’ve been exchanging beta reading services with other writers. While it seems to be very helpful, (also kills the ego!) I find myself holding back some comments/ corrections I want to make because I don’t feel qualified to do so. I almost always refer those writers to an editor.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

It’s a good question. I definitely think writers need beta readers. That’s a very helpful way to get/give feedback. I do it myself all the time. I think it’s up to each writer to intuitively know when it feels right to shift to a professional editor. Also, though, I think you can always say what you feel as a beta reader when critiquing, but maybe add something like, ‘As a reader I felt...’ In other words: You’re not an expert but this is your honest reaction as a reader.

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Heather Holland's avatar

Thanks, I like that answer!

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J. M. Elliott's avatar

This is great advice and spot on. As a writer, you can't take editing too personally. You definitely have to feel comfortable with the editor you choose, and trust that you're on the same team. Part of that is knowing they care about improving your project. I was really glad I shopped around and found an editor who could be openminded but honest in reading my novel and giving me useful feedback. It was a bit daunting to give someone license to take a red pen to my ms, but it gave me a valuable perspective on my writing.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Beautiful 🤩

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