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Mark Starlin's avatar

I would love to have templates for newsletters. I currently use a draft story as my template and copy and paste the items into a new newsletter, but a template would be better.

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Ronald L. Wagner's avatar

Following up with you after today's Writers Office Hours in which I asked Substack to implement a dedicated format for serialized novels.

The newsletter format doesn't work well at all.

The new Magazine layout gives me hope that Substack will soon give us novel writers a format that serves the needs of novel readers.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

I agree with this and appreciate you dropping a comment here. In your ideal world, how would you imagine it working (within the general constraints of the platform)?

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Ronald L. Wagner's avatar

I wouldn't change the overall look by much. In other words, I think my vision of it would be easy to implement.

What I Would Keep

I'd keep the pinned article at top with the graphic and the short blurb. I'm happy with that and with what I have up there now.

I'd keep the "Sections" tabs at the top. I plan to use it for my seasons, as in seasons of a TV series. If a writer is working on a serialized story, they could use those tabs for their various novels. It's kind of the same thing anyway. I plan each season to have 13 episodes. So, what I'm doing is like writing mulitple books but all with 13 chapters and with the same core set of characters.

I'd keep the list down the right-hand side. No changes.

I'd keep the basic look of each "article" having a small graphic next to the title and subtitle on the home page.

What I Would Change

I would not force the articles to fall into an automatic timeline. The writer could order them as needed, which would mean we could place Chapter 1 first and then post additional chapters after it.

Rather than clicking on one of those bringing up an article to read, it would bring up a page that contained all of the serial segments the comprise that chapter.

There would be simple buttons to jump to the next segment or to return to the home page.

I would also add the ability for the writer to not have an article on the home page at all, which is a function I would use when a season is complete to clean up my home page so that those "season" icons would be on that season's tab at the top.

A regular novelist would use that function to move a completed novel to the tab and clear the home page for a new set of chapters for the next book.

Like I said, I think it would be a minor change.

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Ronald L. Wagner's avatar

Thank you for keeping at them. You're right, the newsletter format is a kludge for novels.

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Scott Ocamb's avatar

A software term for implementing a terrible workaround for a desired feature.

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Bonnie Ausfeld's avatar

I am new to Substack and an expert in business networking. I am also a published fiction novel writer. My newsletter on Substack is its first if its kind on the platform. I am looking for subscribers. https://bonniea.substack.com/p/the-end-user

www.beaconresourcespublishing.com

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D.W. Robertson's avatar

I think it would be nice to reverse the chronology of posts, especially within an individual section. For instance, I house all my official chapters under a heading.

https://novainteritus.substack.com/s/the-chapters

Some things I've seen work well and implemented are navigation related, using custom buttons, always having forward and backward nav at the top AND bottom of each serialized post. At the end of each chapter I list each all section-numbers with links so the reader can jump back. I've also found it useful to number the posts in a very obvious and definitive way, and put the number at the beginning of the chapter name.

I also use a dedicated heading / section with a Table of Contents. This area also gets used for the synopsis, introduction, reminder posts to readers, etc.

https://novainteritus.substack.com/p/table-of-content

I think the magazine format is confusing for new readers. A new format for serialized fiction might look like the standard format, with the posts in reverse order (oldest - newest) and the top hero pinned post could be two columns instead of one. For instance, you could have chapter one pinned up next to your table of contents or the synopsis post.

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Samuél Lopez-Barrantes's avatar

Better late than never to this post! I think the podcast aspect is a great function, but it's unfortunate that we can't have a recording function native to written posts as well ... I've been experimenting with saying a quick hello and reading my serialized chapters out loud, and folks seem to respond well to having the option to listen versus read, especially now that the smartphone app is online

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Geoffrey Gevalt's avatar

I think this feature allows you to put audio with a written post.

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Samuél Lopez-Barrantes's avatar

Yes! They updated to include this option, very cool indeed

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Michael Mohr's avatar

I was just thinking about that! I wish there was an auto-voice or something that you could record to read your prose into audio so subscribers could listen.

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Geoffrey Gevalt's avatar

I am thrilled that Substack has added the ability to include audio with your posts. That means that in addition to a podcast, I can give readers the text AND my audio narration. So a reader can read the text--either here or in their email; they can read and listen or they can listen. My plan for my upcoming novel is to distribute it in as many formats as possible so I can broaden my audience. Some may just want the ebook. Or paperback. So I'll have that, too.

A note: As someone who is fleeing Medium.com, Substack's introduction of AI bot audio narrations of posts was, at first blush, worrisome. Medium's can't pronounce my name and destroy the rhythm, tone and meaning of what I write. HOWEVER, unlike Medium, Substack folks told me today that you you can opt out by writing to Support with the link to your publication. You ALSO can now record your own audio (or upload your own audio file) that will replace any potential bot narration.

But you were really asking for possible improvements:

I would love to see a linking system (like most blogs) on the bottom and/or top that allow for an easy link back to a previous chapter or to the next chapter.

It would be great if the story summary appeared automatically at the top of the post. ...

AND, I would love a space here where people could talk about their experiences of publishing fiction on Substack (perhaps there is one--do give me a link if you know of one) to share what worked and what didn't. And I don't mean what I see constantly on medium: "7 ways to Make $$$ Writing Fiction on Medium." I mean something more informal; the exchange of ideas.

Because we all want the same thing, right? ENGAGED readers.

Thanks for this.

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Summer Redfox's avatar

When I heard about the automated voice feature I thought about leaving substack. I can't imagine anything worse than having fiction read like a teleprompt. Fiction relies on the readers internal voice to bring the story alive and project the authors writing style. At the very least it needs a human voice but not every human has a voice suitable for it, or the skill to read well. Thanks for sharing how I can opt out of this 'feature'

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Hi Geoffrey, is this still an opt-out feature? I haven't seen automatic audio in my posts, but I'm new here and only have 3 so far (tomorrow #4) - Like you, I would really NOT like a bot reading my work.

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Geoffrey Gevalt's avatar

Substack doesn’t make it easy. As far as I know you still have to contact support and ask them to remove the bot audio narration from your newsletter. They trespinded and did it in a day.

My audio now can be accessed in the same way the bot used to be played. Check it out on my substack if you wish... https://geoffreygevalt.substack.com

By the way you can also do your post and the audio as a podcast which gives you other options.

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Victor D. Sandiego's avatar

Thanks much for the info. Still figuring out how things work here. Sounds like you've been at it for a lot longer, appreciate your help.

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Summer Redfox's avatar

Not much of a suggestion. But I live rural and have an unstable internet connection. The autosaving of edits with this kind of connection is quite poor on substack. I may make several minor edits on my way down a post only to have an orange bar at the top telling me I'm offline and there is no way to get my connection stable then save the edits myself. I've been caught out with small edits that were not saved and worse, partial edits where an unintended word was inserted into the line. The lack of a save button is frustrating as I can't prompt the page to save once my internet is back online.

For the moment I'm writing every post in an offline app and editing there before uploading to substack. But it would be nice to be able to use the drafts feature online for shorter pieces.

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

So cool to find you. I'm trying to build readership: So, the spiel: The arts, books, movies, all things literary but primarily: Write it! How to Get Started. I post once a week on Thursdays. All early posts are free. Posts on Sundays, always free. For “Write It! How to get started” eventually you hit—I know I know—that paywall. I’ve been writing (award winnings short stories collected _The Woman Who Never Cooked_, novel, memoir--none self-published) and new stuff in lit. mags and been teaching a long time— have loads of advice to get folks going or going deeper.

Sundays, I post a literary essay, movie review—or something I couldn't keep quiet about. Here's an example: https://marytabor.substack.com/p/time-for-the-united-states-to-do.

I'm finishing a novel offline, short story based on it out now to lit. mags.

Wondering how I might help you or anything you think if you've got time to take a look.

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E.Scott's avatar

It would be great if the Substack editor had a few more features, it is pretty basic and not as good as even the one on Medium?

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